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SPN drabble: "hellfire dreams"

Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: PG-13
Author's Notes: Written for the spn_drabble prompt "memories". Unbeta'd.
Length: 100 words
Spoilers, Warnings: Mild season 4 spoilers.
Summary: It wasn't the rack that broke him.
Disclaimer: These characters belong to Kripke.

pain the color of rage
brutal, loving hands pin him down

Dean moans, spreads his legs and bares his throat, begging for Sam’s cock, his knife, his lash.

“ – awake?” Sam stands a careful distance away from Dean’s bed, voice thick with worry and sleep.

Dean bolts for the bathroom, slams the door between them, and turns the shower all the way cold. Not real, he argues against 40 years of memories. My … that Sam wasn’t real. Dean stands shivering and achingly hard under the blast of icy water and tells himself that he doesn’t miss Hell.


( 17 comments — Leave a comment )
Jan. 29th, 2010 04:44 pm (UTC)
i'm not a fan of wincest, but wow this was... just wow. powerful for such a short drabble
Jan. 30th, 2010 03:43 am (UTC)
thank you, I appreciate you stepping out your comfort zone to try it, feigned_living! For a purist like me, a drabble is a story of exactly 100 words. It's a fun way of polishing your craft, making every word count.
Jan. 30th, 2010 03:48 am (UTC)
i usually stick with 100 on drabbles too, but i recently did a 200 word one just to try something different.
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Jan. 30th, 2010 03:44 am (UTC)
*stomps around in her Angst Boots* Thanks, aerye!
Jan. 29th, 2010 08:31 pm (UTC)
Wow! Oh Dean...so fucked up...but I love it! This is so brutal...my heart!

Jan. 30th, 2010 04:06 am (UTC)
What can I say? I like to watch them suffer. Almost as much as Kripke. Thank you for the comment, misspadfoot!
Jan. 31st, 2010 08:12 am (UTC)
LOL! I do too! What does that say about us?!?
Jan. 29th, 2010 08:42 pm (UTC)
Ouch. Potent.

Jan. 30th, 2010 04:06 am (UTC)
Thank you, Jackie.
Jan. 29th, 2010 08:49 pm (UTC)
YES. This...this is saved. Thank you so much for sharing this with us all!!

*Shivers in joy*

*hugs you tight*
Jan. 30th, 2010 04:07 am (UTC)
Ah, a woman after my own tastes. I'm so glad you enjoyed, a_pheonixdragon!
Feb. 21st, 2010 12:25 am (UTC)
Nice and dark and every word in it's place! Wonderfully done!
Feb. 21st, 2010 05:38 am (UTC)
Thank you! There's a longer version in my head, with Dean's slow seduction in Hell, that I might get around to someday.
Sep. 26th, 2010 05:08 am (UTC)
Oh that IS fucked up - making Wincest his most desired Hell... ::eyes you::
Sep. 26th, 2010 06:58 pm (UTC)
*beams* This feedback makes me very happy.
Jun. 1st, 2011 04:14 pm (UTC)
It makes perfect sense to me, that if Dean could choose his own Hell, it would be this one. He would want to be with Sam, no.matter.what. I really liked this :)
Jun. 2nd, 2011 02:06 am (UTC)
I think so, too! Oh, you are going to LOVE the podfic project I'm working with reena_jenkins on. Keep an eye out for it next month!
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